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A poem about a girl I like <3.
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My love for you is vast,
I know I've done some things to hurt you in the past.
I know you think i'm not so cool,
I know you think I'm some kind of fool,
But I can change.

I can change into someone new,
Just for you.

You're not a preppy bitch,
You're not a whiny snitch,
You're not who you think you are,
You're the best person I've met in my life so far.

The dance is drawing near,
And I'm hiding in fear,
Of what everybody will think of me,
Just sitting down with a smile across my face,
Thinking of you.
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I swear this was all from me.
Also, first poem.

Updated: 02/10/09 8:37 AM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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10 Comments

Feb. 9, 2009 | 10:29 PM EMOxxxCHICKA says:

question: r u actually dating this girl?

Feb. 10, 2009 | 8:45 AM Longhorn97 responds:

No, but I just have insanely weird feelings for her. So, I'm basically just trying to get her.

Feb. 9, 2009 | 10:45 PM TonnFuIp says:

Are you stalking her?

Feb. 10, 2009 | 8:44 AM Longhorn97 responds:

No.

Feb. 9, 2009 | 11:46 PM illbeyourvampire says:

Awe

Feb. 10, 2009 | 8:45 AM Longhorn97 responds:

:3.

Feb. 10, 2009 | 5:14 PM Spaghetti14 says:

Well, if it's your first poem it's pretty good.
Try not to do like an ABABABABAB rhyming type thing.
Mix it up, and remember, try not to force it to rhyme.
Sometimes natural unrhyming things sound a LOT better than unnatural rhyming things.

Feb. 11, 2009 | 8:29 AM Longhorn97 responds:

Thanks. I just thought this up randomly. I still really like this girl though, I didn't think that up randomly :P.

Apr. 3, 2009 | 2:42 PM weaselfan says:

instead just ask her to sit next to you at lunch a poem shold only be brought if your already going out with her you never whant to go to fast it will imbaris you and shell probably tell her freinds and they wil tell the whole school and no girl that hard of it will ever whant to date you...in that school at least so go very slow make a freind ship first and then after like 1 or 2 weeks ask her out and on the first datew take her some were exspencive then you can take her some were like a movie mcdonalds or a mall these tips should help

Oct. 20, 2009 | 6:56 PM lol-king says:

i dont like this poem, sorry

Oct. 21, 2009 | 5:32 PM Longhorn97 responds:

It's k.

Oct. 20, 2009 | 7:00 PM Eye8UrBrains says:

weaselfan's right. when you do go out with her, then you can show her

Oct. 20, 2009 | 7:02 PM NiNjabaNaNa says:

extremly good poem, especially for your first, i hope it works for you! ;)

Oct. 20, 2009 | 7:13 PM Soldierofhentai21 says:

............Poetry fail.

Oct. 20, 2009 | 7:44 PM GiantDouche says:

creepy stalker is creepy.